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    P.S. I Love you-Original

    HI
    I wrote this song a while ago and this song means alot to me. Please tell me what you think
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=knoCl7ebOXw&hd=1

    Lyrics:

    I never wanted to write a lovesong
    I mever wanted to fall in love
    I never wanted to freak out when I get a message from you
    but look at what you've done to me
    I just fell in Love with you
    and I'm asking myself
    Do you feel the same for me

    oho
    I would never dare myself
    to look you in the eyes
    and tell you that I love you
    oho

    so this song's for you
    note for note
    and I hope you get my message
    P.S. I love you
    P.S. I love you

    Do you know that I'm the one for you
    Do you know that your lips belong on mine
    Do you know that we could be forever
    You and Me
    Me and You

    oho but
    I would never dare myself
    to look you in the eyes
    and tell you that I love you
    oho

    so this song's for you
    note for note
    and I hope you get my message
    P.S. I love you
    P.S. I love you

    take my hand
    hold me tight
    kiss me right here and now
    listen

    I never wanted to write a Lovesong
    but you're the reason that I did

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    Nicely done Jana.
    I really liked how you used the guitar while singing.
    Definitely keep signing, playing and writing.

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    A Top (and Heart) of Gold Goldtop's Avatar
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    Another nice one Jana. Way to go!

    Lloyd/Goldtop
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